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posted 30th Jan 2017, 1:28 AM

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30th Jan 2017, 1:28 AM

EndiThorn

Ok, is the text absolute trash on this page? I was trying to get my font to work, but I just start doing it by hand again if it ain't lookin too good

EDIT: alright, upon looking at it on the website I've decided I don't like it. I'll fix this page sometime soon... the text is kind of an assault on the eyes

EDIT 2: I changed the font back to the old one I used, and it looks way better. I'll be changing all the other pages, soon. You know what they say: if it aint broke dont fix it lol amirighr or amirigjt baby!! ??

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30th Jan 2017, 10:32 AM

chris-tar

Thanks for the update!
I can read the text, and its not that bad, but I agree that a standard font of some kind would perhaps be easier to read.

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30th Jan 2017, 6:08 PM

EndiThorn

I think it's cause i put the text in before i shrunk the image. :[ This is the first page i drew on a bigger canvas and then shrunk down later, instead of drawing it at a smaller size to begin with, but i still didn't like the font on pages 1-4... i might just use the font i used for the old comic, i think that should work okay

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26th Feb 2017, 12:13 AM

HeSerpenty

So... is he a child with cancer or something? :')

You've done a beautiful job with this and making it very dreamlike. And heart breaking.... if my assumptions are true X'D

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26th Feb 2017, 1:25 AM

EndiThorn

Yes he is! And thank you so much. I was going for a dreamy sort of thing, so I'm glad that came across :)

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